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An awesome flash movie!
Great work.
10/10
John~
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Thanks John!
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The submission hurt my eyes because of the amount of times it flashed. You could have added music before submitting it to Newgrounds though. That could have took you like 10-20 Minutes or probably even less. Yeah, 5-8 classes isn't a lot but that's no excuse because then you shouldn't have submitted it especially if you thought you were going to get a low score which seems to be the case. I've seen Fifa 09 commercials and a whole bunch of EA Sports one too bu this one just wasn't good. It flashed too much and it didn't show any game play which you could of added to make it better. Maybe you could have used a program (Fraps) and watched a game play video of it and recorded at the same time. Or possibly the theme you chose for your flash commercial is just too complicated which i think is also the problem.
Overall it was bad, sorry.
John~
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It hurt your eyes for the entire movie or for just the first part...?
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I enjoyed this a lot!
It was great to watch and to be honest i can't stop watching it.
Great Work!
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cheers!
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It was pretty good.
The graphics were ok.
The music was good.
Keep up the good work!
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Thanks :D
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It had good music but the flash graphics were....... well there wasn't many graphics going on.
You should make stuff happening in the flash instead of little colors just going back and fourth.
Music, good.
Graphics, not much there.
So, work on the stuff i told you and you'll be a great flash artist!
-DS-
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thanks for advice
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The humor in this was pretty funny.
I laughed a few times to be honest.
The graphics were ok for your first flash but for your second flash you'll want to work on them.
I personally liked the one where he gets hit by a car.
The sounds were good but maybe sometimes they didn't fit in that part.
Apart from the things i said you need to work on, Good Job!
-DS-
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thanks
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Those nine minutes were really interesting. I really liked the whole thing and the movie itself was outstanding. The backgrounds were drawn perfect. The animation was very well done. And the story was outstanding!
So in the end 10/10
---DarkSoldier---
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Thank you so much! :)
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That was a classic just like the title.
I bet you made the creators of sunshine crew very proud.
So in the end GREAT JOB!
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Thanks John, I hope you did like it.
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This flash made me laugh a lot. This flash movie was very good because it seems like it is the real Celebrity Jeopardy. The graphics were ok so you got a 6. Your style was very good so a 10 on that. The sound was great. The violence was violent like i like it. The humor now that was something that for sure gives you a 10. I hope to see you make another one because this one was very good. Oh i almost forgot. An Overall score of 7 because it was good. Thats pretty much the end of my review so until next time.
~DarkSoldier~
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Thanks for the good feedback, I'm not really good with graphics so I tried to make it a less graphical flash and focus more on just the humour of audio. TY for the review.
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Now the graphics were just awesome. The sound/voices were good. Style well yeah i liked your style and violence yeah the end when that guy got killed. The humor well that was 10/10 very funny.
{{DarkSoldier}}
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Cools, glad ya liked it. Thanks for the review!
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